vendredi 11 juillet 2014
Our short story
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PART ONE FROM: REIN SARAH BLUE
Everything is covered with blood...everything is red..little amy stood there gazing at the corpses of her two best friends,shattered into pieces..just like the puzzles that she used to collect..she ran away..but can we expect more from a ten year-old girl? She kept running and running until she become unable to stand on her two legs,she was hungry,lonely and lost in the woods. That night she slept..just slept..because it's a must for a human body, her life has changed once for good.
In the morning she woke up, started walking and collecting fruit from trees thinking about what happened.
She once was a normal girl who has normal family problems
one night she invited her best friends to her house so they can review for a test that they will sit for it the next day. When amy,simone and jone were studying maths together her father came home. He was an alcooholic. He started screaming and yelling holding a sword in his hands,her father was a prison gard,during the years of war.
In the morning she woke up, started walking and collecting fruit from trees thinking about what happened.
She once was a normal girl who has normal family problems
one night she invited her best friends to her house so they can review for a test that they will sit for it the next day. When amy,simone and jone were studying maths together her father came home. He was an alcooholic. He started screaming and yelling holding a sword in his hands,her father was a prison gard,during the years of war.
PART TWO FROM: SARAH LAAJIMI
Drunk and dizzy because of bear and several shots of vodka, he confused the reality with the past. The poor kids stared at him mystified as he stepped swinging forward to them. Little Amy have seen it many times, only this time, she did not have the time to warn her friends and tell them to hide. She rolled down the sofa and they tried to follow her, only the hands of Amy's father grabbed them and he placed them on the sofa looking at them right in the eye and shouting words that cannot be understood.
He would never hurt kids. He loved his little girl more than anything the world. But his drinking problem never let him show it. Amy thought he hated her, but she has no idea what he has been through. The years of guarding the most dangerous jails and dealing with criminals and murders for many years made him forget who he really was. He was in pain, and the only way he could handle it was when he had a bottle.
What would anyone think when they would see such seen? A girl was hiding under a sofa shaking, a man yelling at two helpless kids with a sharp sword in the hand, a woman who could only be his wife running to see what was going on.
Who slaughtered Simone and Jone?
It didn't take much time for Amy to realize that she needs real food and a real home. She was still shaking and looking around every time she heard the slightest noise. Her pale little face was more like an old women' than a ten year old.
She ran between the trees the whole day and it was getting dark, but she was deeply lost. She was drowning in the leaves of the trees and the sounds of forest animals. She knew there was no use of running in the unknown in the dark, so she just lied beneath a tree and closed her eyes.
Her entire body was shaking. Was it because of hunger or fear? It was most certainly because of the footsteps she heard. She wasn't sure; it could be an animal or the tricky sound of wind playing with branches of trees. But it wasn't. The sound was getting clearer and some light appeared. A shadow was getting to form. "They are here to get me. They are here to take me" she kept thinking. She had to hide or run, but the moment she rose from her spot, she felt the hand that grabbed her shoulder.
He would never hurt kids. He loved his little girl more than anything the world. But his drinking problem never let him show it. Amy thought he hated her, but she has no idea what he has been through. The years of guarding the most dangerous jails and dealing with criminals and murders for many years made him forget who he really was. He was in pain, and the only way he could handle it was when he had a bottle.
What would anyone think when they would see such seen? A girl was hiding under a sofa shaking, a man yelling at two helpless kids with a sharp sword in the hand, a woman who could only be his wife running to see what was going on.
Who slaughtered Simone and Jone?
It didn't take much time for Amy to realize that she needs real food and a real home. She was still shaking and looking around every time she heard the slightest noise. Her pale little face was more like an old women' than a ten year old.
She ran between the trees the whole day and it was getting dark, but she was deeply lost. She was drowning in the leaves of the trees and the sounds of forest animals. She knew there was no use of running in the unknown in the dark, so she just lied beneath a tree and closed her eyes.
Her entire body was shaking. Was it because of hunger or fear? It was most certainly because of the footsteps she heard. She wasn't sure; it could be an animal or the tricky sound of wind playing with branches of trees. But it wasn't. The sound was getting clearer and some light appeared. A shadow was getting to form. "They are here to get me. They are here to take me" she kept thinking. She had to hide or run, but the moment she rose from her spot, she felt the hand that grabbed her shoulder.
PART THREE FROM: ABIR MA
She was paralysed and turned slowly to see who was there. No one! How come? She started to freak out. Could it be possible, that her friends' ghosts are hunting her now? As a punishement for her absent sense of responsability and unawareness? But it wasn't her fault though. If only she was able to change her father's attitude, to get away from the house they're currently living in, a house that has become more likely a crime scene than a home. She ran back to the house. As she entered, she met her father's gazes. Even though he seemed lost, she didn't care. To her, he was nothing more than a heartless criminal now. She and her mum have done their best with him, despertately trying to fix his attitude issues and get him out of the misery he was bursting into, but in vain, nothing ever worked. He was becoming more and more agressive and wilder with every new day. She entered her room and layed on the bed. Within a few minutes, she fell asleep. An outrageous sound woke her up. Terrified, she walked out of her room, with very careful steps. As the stairs ended, she couldn't believe her eyes ...
PART FOUR FROM: IMEN BOUHAJJA
PART 4:
Seeing her two best friends up on their feet and smiling to her, she stared at them for a long time just like a retarded, she felt like her mind is going to explode because of the millions of thoughts that crossed her mind: are these the ghosts of her friends?! Is she having a nightmare?! .. She started even doubting of her mind ability. While she was swimming in an ocean of thoughts, she heard a screaming from upstairs she turned her eyes for a moment as a reaction and looked back again but there wasn’t anybody. What the hell did happen? Her friends were standing right in front of her eyes with a cute smile on their faces and again she was drowned in her thoughts forgetting the scream which she heard. But a second shouting transported her back to reality so she went to her mum’s room, the place from which the yell was, she was too shaking to run so she fell two or three times. The door of the bedroom was opened, she entered with a scared look on her face. And there was the surprise, there was no body, the room was clean and empty like unusual. The little girl ran all over the house looking for her mum but without result. A 10 years old girl who had been through all of this in just couple of days finds herself alone what could do except crying. In the corner of her room she was crying sometimes and yelling other times till she heard someone calling her name..
Seeing her two best friends up on their feet and smiling to her, she stared at them for a long time just like a retarded, she felt like her mind is going to explode because of the millions of thoughts that crossed her mind: are these the ghosts of her friends?! Is she having a nightmare?! .. She started even doubting of her mind ability. While she was swimming in an ocean of thoughts, she heard a screaming from upstairs she turned her eyes for a moment as a reaction and looked back again but there wasn’t anybody. What the hell did happen? Her friends were standing right in front of her eyes with a cute smile on their faces and again she was drowned in her thoughts forgetting the scream which she heard. But a second shouting transported her back to reality so she went to her mum’s room, the place from which the yell was, she was too shaking to run so she fell two or three times. The door of the bedroom was opened, she entered with a scared look on her face. And there was the surprise, there was no body, the room was clean and empty like unusual. The little girl ran all over the house looking for her mum but without result. A 10 years old girl who had been through all of this in just couple of days finds herself alone what could do except crying. In the corner of her room she was crying sometimes and yelling other times till she heard someone calling her name..
PART FIVE FROM: ROUA HELALI
Amy wasn't sure of what she heard , but it was a very clear voice calling her name. "Amy, Amy ..." It was too soft to be her mother's voice. Suddenly her body went colder and colder that she can't feel her fingers anymore. In out of curiosity she wanted to check the voice. It maybe was some help to save her from the hell that she was living and to take her somewhere safe which she could call a home. After all she was only 10 year old girl who lost everything in The blink of an eye. She took slow steps walking toward with those ideas dancing in her head like they were celebrating on her behave ... she was down stairs , the twentyfour steps she took were for her a life journey. She stood there shaking, almost not feeling her body. Little Amy shut her eyes tight and opened them again, there was a little girl wearing a lovely white dress with purple flowers around her neck. Like angel, she smiled at her and took her hand and started walking into that white light that appeared out of nowhere. Her freinds were in it smiling at her and waving for her to join .... " She is here" a cop yelling " quickly get something to warm her she is as cold as ice " ....
PART SIX FROM: SARAH EL-KAFFEL
Few hours later, Amy opened her eyes very slowly. Yet she didn’t see anything except a white light, she thought for a second that she’s finally in heaven, she won’t suffer from life anymore, she won’t cry, she won’t get hurt, she will just live her pinky dreams and fly with butterflies, She thought that she got the freedom that she always waited for. She started to make plans for every single thing she wants to make, she drew in her imagination the new room she’ll decorate, her two friends who will live with her in there tree house, the number of cats and rabbits she will raise, the baggage she will take for her worldwide travel, the camera that she never had..
Suddenly she heard some noise and it wasn’t for sure her mom’ voice, it was like yelling: “ Amy? Amy Flurenz?” her heart beated so fast, she tried to move her arms and fingers, she touched something so cold and she said:” Ouch!”
Then after trying to recognize the resource of the noise and while she’s trying to collect the rest of her messy thoughts she discovered that it was just a short daydream and unfortunately she’s still in hell. The bright light was the light pipe , the cold thing was the metal hand of her bed and the strange voice was actually the doctor’s one. She closed her eyes again so tight , she kept forcing her mind to get the imaginary world she was living in back ,where she was actually happy in there, but it was in vain..
tears fell from her sad eyes, she’s back, she gave up, she hates her life AGAIN..
Suddenly she heard some noise and it wasn’t for sure her mom’ voice, it was like yelling: “ Amy? Amy Flurenz?” her heart beated so fast, she tried to move her arms and fingers, she touched something so cold and she said:” Ouch!”
Then after trying to recognize the resource of the noise and while she’s trying to collect the rest of her messy thoughts she discovered that it was just a short daydream and unfortunately she’s still in hell. The bright light was the light pipe , the cold thing was the metal hand of her bed and the strange voice was actually the doctor’s one. She closed her eyes again so tight , she kept forcing her mind to get the imaginary world she was living in back ,where she was actually happy in there, but it was in vain..
tears fell from her sad eyes, she’s back, she gave up, she hates her life AGAIN..
THE END
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